Jekyll Island Beach 2012

Jekyll Island Beach 2012
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Saturday, January 28, 2012

The Jumper, part II

The Rogue Speaks:

Our dear Jenny has given us an excellent prompt, thanks to Nonna's suggestion.  This is a Saturday Centus that is right up my current alley!  To read the first part of the story, go here.

Miriam regained her composure, and called Aaron, at his office. "Get down to Dad's as fast as you can! He's going to kill himself!" she screamed.

By the time Aaron arrived, Miriam had made her way up the elevator, and was standing outside her father's condo. Police, and men in suits were milling around inside. Although the door was open, she was not allowed to enter.
"So it has come to this!" Aaron said breathlessly, as he arrived at Miriam’s side. "We know where all the bodies are buried since 2008, but I never thought it would hit him so hard!!”
“Aaron! What does that mean??” Miriam cried.

19 comments:

anitamombanita said...

Hmm. what DOES that mean? Are you going to let him answer? I wanna know!

And I kinda actually enjoy your religious/political rants. I'm not one of those people who only wants to hear what people who think just like me have to say. I'd be bored outta my everlastin' gourd!! :)

Have a great week, Judie!

Judie said...

Anita, Rod feels that way as well. Actually I'm kind of tired of hearing BOTH.

busana muslim said...

Very interesting... I really like it... Thank you so much...

Nonna Beach said...

OMGosh Judie, this was a fabulous part 2 to your outstanding story...what's gonna happen next is driving me crazy !!!

I rant once in a blue moon and it feels good to spew sometimes...BTW, HUGS for the linky love XO

Vicki/Jake said...

Oh you're bad.....
Good, but way bad:)

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

Judie, I love you but you're scaring the crap out of me.

PS Great job!
xoRobyn

Pondside said...

The bodies.....?
I'll be back!

Tammy said...

I'm with Anitamombanita. What DOES that mean? Chilling!

cj Schlottman said...

Judie, Now you've done done it. Like everyone else, I'm on tenderhooks. You know how much I love your writing, and these little pieces are two of the reasons why.

Namaste.........cj

JJ said...

Judie: Not to change the subject (which I love), but when are you and Rod jumping East again?

Jo said...

hey, you can't leave us dangling like this! I demand and ending!!! lol, really well done Judy, you rocked the prompt!

Steph said...

What!? You've got to stop doing this to us.

Kara said...

makes me want to read more

ChrisJ said...

makes me want to read more, as well!

Good one!

Ames said...

What?? You lost me somewhere between dad's going to kill himself and they know where all the bodies are buried.
You got some splainin' to do woman!!! You're leaving us hanging from a cliff here.~Ames

TheHOchieS said...

Judie! It's been forever since I've been here...probably due to the fact that my computer was busted. Anyway, what's this about bodies?!

More, please.

Lisa Taylor said...

Augh - cliffhangers! Waiting for more :-)

myorii said...

Yes, Aaron, what does that mean?! The story definitely took an interesting turn. I'm pretty curious as to where it's headed now :)

Jenny said...

Aaron? Miriam? Judy?

What the heck is going on here?

This is crazy cool!