It has been quite a while since I have written any "flash fiction," a short story of 1000 words or less. I used to write these short fictional stories when Jenny was sponsoring our beloved Saturday Centus. The following is one I wrote one autumn afternoon:
Electric Leaves
The lake is calm now
in the smoky sunlight
of an October afternoon.
Electric leaves on the sourwoods
glow fiery red above us
with a solar power,
and the faded quilt is
cool now, and damp from
our love-making.
The sourwoods
are the first to turn in autumn,
and you will be the first
to go away, like those electric leaves
that fall and wither
when winter comes;
but the fiery red glow
of that autumn afternoon
will live forever
in my heart.
Now, head on over to Jenny's Warm Heart Wednesday and read more offerings.
8 comments:
I still remember those days and the beautiful fall colors. I also remember the smell of fall. When I was growing up everyone burned the leaves. I don't think that's allowed anymore.
We are just now getting into the reds and yellows. We haven't had a major frost yet here close to the Gulf Coast in Texas.
You bring memories with this one, I wrote a few Flash Fictions for Jenny as well.
Occasionally now I write some with the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads. I think Saturday is Flash writing when the feel like having it. Not there today. http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/
My "poems" are here (could be other flashes too): http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/search/label/Flash%20Writing
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I'm glad it'll be a happy memory each autumn for the narrator.
This is lovely. I am still in awe of the autumn colors, and have been for the 20 years of living in the midwest. Thank you for your beautiful words and the very colorful picture!
I have yet to see an American Fall, I hear it's stunning and your words paint an impelling reason to come visit and do some leaf crunching!
Wren x
Lovely poetry so well penned ~
Wishing you the magic and love of the season,
artmusedog and carol
Very nice, Judie. I, too, remember those days of Saturday Centus with great fondness. What fun we had!
=)
Oh Judie. This was absolutely poignant and beautiful.
I miss Saturday Centus.
I truly do.
I've been toying with starting it up again to help me write again.
You've made me thoughtful.
And you've warmed my heart!
Thank you!
XOXO
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